Friday, 20 March 2020

What Is On The Shore?

 
We are learning to use adjectives to add detail to our writing.

2 comments:

  1. You have used very good adjectives to add detail Tom. You could collect some objects at home and write another poem. I like your layout.

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  2. i like the beach and i love all the adjectives you have used in your writing

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